Monday 31 January 2011

Short Film Evaluation


For my short film project I worked with Emma and Kai who I worked with in my previous 2 video projects. They have proven to be amazing group members time and time again. Over the numerous times we have worked together as a group we have built a great relationship that allows us to work effectively and be more open with our opinions. We as a group are strong and consistently work hard as we all bring different elements in different stages of the project. For example during the planning stages Emma has great organisation skills therefore the planning is where she took most of the control. Emma is also particularly good at writing and understands us well to translate our ideas into planning and preparation paper work. Kai is particularly strong at editing so therefore he excelled most during the later stages of the project. Whilst my strong points are towards the creative side of things therefore ideas, storyboard and filming is where I felt most comfortable. All in all we are a strong group and we work well together. I would happily work with Emma and Kai again.
As a group we did suffer a few hiccups along the way which delayed our route to a great short film. As a group although we work consistently well we have worked together 3 projects in a row and our company together may have been too much at times. Therefore there was more conflict within the group and we were in a mind frame where we thought about previous projects which at time interfered with this project in particular. For example the phase ‘But you did that last project’ was used often which meant we felt the need to switch roles on occasions even though it weren’t the best option. This rarely happened but all in all was a learning process and gave each member a chance to have a go at something new. Also all our mind frame during the beginning of the project wasn’t as desired as the previous projects. I felt as a group we was laid back and didn’t realise it was a bigger project therefore we had to step our level up and we worked at the same rate which meant we fell short. Overall the team worked well but there was defiantly room for improvement. The short film is a project that I can say I learnt a lot from and has made me realise to work much harder whether it’s with the same group or another.
The short film itself ‘Take Note’ is a product that I’m fairly happy with and shows a developed style that our group consistently has throughout. It shows growth in terms of camera shots and technically it’s advanced. The idea initially explores how a set value i.e. £5 note in society can increase or decrease depending on who’s holding it. So it follows a short journey of a five pound note passed between 3 people from different classes and social backgrounds and seeing how they treat the £5 note from the £5 perspective.  The idea itself I personally think it’s a good idea. I think as a group we didn’t execute it well and the message of the story didn’t show within the narrative and what we edited. I think if we followed the storyboard we could have avoided this problem. Following the storyboard and having that freedom has its good and bad points but getting the balance right is what we found difficult.
There are a few lighting issues that I personally weren’t happy with and has assured me to consider hiring lighting equipment for the next project regardless. The first initial idea was to include a voice over from the £5 notes perspective but Emma and Kai decided not as there felt it would have made the short film ‘cheesy’. I on the other hand felt it needed a voiceover. I felt without the voiceover it lost its plot and narrative became unclear. It’s a controversial decision but I put my faith and trust in Kai and Emma and all in all I’m happy with the product we have produced.
More footage could have been maintained which is another mistake we made that we could improve on next time. Also more planning and preparation could have helped us a lot in the long run. Maybe given more of a thought on re-shooting as the footage we maintained weren’t good to complement or give the idea/storyline any justice. We made the best product we could have with the footage we maintained which shows we are resourceful in a way but could have made a brilliant project if we gathered more footage.
Overall as a project we did well but not up to our usual standards which to me is disappointing. As a project it’s better than our previous projects but the growth wasn’t as big from the last project. If I had another chance I would have the desire to make a much better short film which I feel my whole group would agree. The project is a learning curb and has made myself, Kai and Emma not only stronger as media students but also stronger as individuals which will be shown within our next project. I can assure you that ‘Take Note’ is a short film worth watching if you are in a mind frame where you watch it’s deeper than it seems as it surface. All in all I am happy but not satisfied as I would have hoped but still feel I have a lot to learn.

Monday 29 November 2010

To-do List (Short film)

The to-do list.

We have got 1 and half weeks left to complete our short film and it feels we have so much left to do. We have finally decided on our main soundtrack that we have selected as a group that I found searching online. But as a group we decided that the music would change between each character. The music that we have decided is for the first character but we have yet to decide 2 other soundtracks that would suit the atmosphere of the scenerio and the character. So we have still carry our search for a soundtrack for our short film. The soundtrack that I found is a instrumental that was made by a producer in America therefore I have to email and pay the producer for the leasing rights to assure the music we are using is legit.  Music is a important element of a short film therefore we want the perfect soundtrack to complement our voice over and the piece itself.

We also have to finish writing up our script and record the voice over for our short film which could be debated the most important element to help build the narrative. We have left the voice over late but watching our piece over and over again without no voiceover allowed us to get a real understanding of the structure the voice would have to carry inorder to bring the story to life and keep the audience engaged thoughout.

We have started our tiltles for our short film. We as a group have a clear vision what we want the title to look like so we are just editing titles to our desired look. We did try many different designs and prints before but felt the other designs looked ‘cheesy’ so we stuck with our original look.

Our sequence is complete and the editing of effects are completed so we need to add music, voiceover and completed titles. I think if we nail both music and voiceover than this short film could be very strong.

Our short film follows codes and conventions of a short film as the content and storyline of the film is very niche and everyday as short film normally are based on everyday situation. Our film takes a everday scenerio and objects and show a different way to look at that common everyday situation. The way we have filmed and the types of shots we have included are very experimental and wouldn’t be seen in a typical mainstream film.

Thursday 18 November 2010

Shooting process for our short film

The filming process went very well and we was all excited about filming our 1st short film. We had to get to work straightaway so we decided to all meet up early time as we knew we had to film everything one day. We got off to a slow start but we looked upon our storyboard for guidance. once we got started we wrapped up the 1st sequence quickly but we hit a obstacle as we needed to film in a news-agents and many of them said they wouldn't allow us to film, so on the search for one that would took a while which delayed our time. When we finally found one we got to work straight away and we managed to film everything in time. We planned to film more footage but we didn't get round to doing it so we decided to call it a day. We figured not to continue filming again as we knew the continuity wouldn't be the same. We also felt our footage was strong enough at the time.

Update on editing process

17-11-10 Lesson
This lesson we tried to fix a error that we found last lesson. Were our tramp scene has a section were there isn't continuity. Therefore we tried to fix our way around so this problem could be avoided. We tried numerous effects and countless methods but found it very hard. We picked the method that looked the best, we still have to show other and see whether they notice it. If people say it defiantly noticeable then we have to change or film again but at the moment we don't have a lot of time so filming is looking less likely.
Next week wednesday we have a lesson where everyone will show each other work so this will be a great opportunity for us to get feedback and see where we could improve or add.

Tuesday 16 November 2010

Editing process - The update

After logging and capturing our footage. I am fairly happy with the footage we have gathered and I see potential in making a brilliant short film.
I feel we haven't filmed enough which is a problem that we always face. Despite this I feel we got the essential footage that was required. We have pieced together a sequence that I feel has both strong and weak points about it.
A problem we are facing now is selecting the music that would suit our work the most and getting the script together to tell the story effectively. We have browsed around for music but we all feel that each soundtrack is lacking something so we are still on the search.
We finally realize that the narrator has to be spot on for this piece to work so that our main focus. At the moment we have the full sequence that needs to be tightened so that the continuity is perfect. We have limited amount of footage so we are considering to film again.
Overall I'm happy with what we have so far and with a lot of work we can create something special.